请高手帮忙修改英文作文这是我的一篇英文作文,但是语法错误还是蛮多的,希望高手帮忙修改一番,另外帮忙修改几个短句成为优美的长句,急用!Peter excitedly said to the mass media:I am always think my su

请高手帮忙修改英文作文这是我的一篇英文作文,但是语法错误还是蛮多的,希望高手帮忙修改一番,另外帮忙修改几个短句成为优美的长句,急用!Peter excitedly said to the mass media:I am always think my su
请高手帮忙修改英文作文
这是我的一篇英文作文,但是语法错误还是蛮多的,希望高手帮忙修改一番,另外帮忙修改几个短句成为优美的长句,急用!
Peter excitedly said to the mass media:I am always think my success just like a dream,maybe I was the most favourite pet of God.”
After graduating from college,Peter earned money depending on his small toggery.But unluckily,the clothes market is not like his imagines,so it is not far from his closing.It is a bad day,Peter had to find some food from the garbage,although he didn’t want to do that.“What It is just like some buleprint,oh,I must take them from the dirty places.” Now Peter lookde them clearly under the street lamp.“Perfect,I have no word to express how wonderful these works .But……why they are here?and who made it?why threw them?”In that time,all questions floated Peter’s mind,but more important thing were waitting for him.
Three days later,a fashion show set out these works and his designer is Peter.All vidicons toward him and money flooded him.

请高手帮忙修改英文作文这是我的一篇英文作文,但是语法错误还是蛮多的,希望高手帮忙修改一番,另外帮忙修改几个短句成为优美的长句,急用!Peter excitedly said to the mass media:I am always think my su
Excitedly,Peter excitedly said to the mass media: "I've always been thinking of my success just as a dream.Maybe I was God's favourite pet."
After graduating from college,Peter earned money depending on his small toggery.But unluckily,the clothing market is not what he imagined,which seemed to have decided his quick failure.It was a bad day when Peter had to find some food from the garbage,although he didn’t want to."What ?there seem to be some designs.Oh,I must take them from the dirt" Then Peter came to look at them clearly in the street lamp."Perfect,I am at a loss for words to express how wonderful these works are .But……why they are here?And who made it?Why they threw them?"At that time,all questions occurred to Peter’s mind.But actually,something more important were waitting for him.
Three days later,a fashion show demonstrated these works.And the designer is, Peter.All vidicons rushed toward him and money flooded him.

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