Do you know about Thomas Edison?The following article may give some more details about Thomas Edison.Thomas Edison was a great inveror in the world .He was born in America in 1847.When he had studied in schoolfor only three months ,her mum take he ho

Do you know about Thomas Edison?The following article may give some more details about Thomas Edison.Thomas Edison was a great inveror in the world .He was born in America in 1847.When he had studied in schoolfor only three months ,her mum take he ho
Do you know about Thomas Edison?The following article may give some more details about Thomas Edison.
Thomas Edison was a great inveror in the world .He was born in America in 1847.When he had studied in schoolfor only three months ,her mum take he home.Edison studied by himself.He was interested in science.Although he encountered many difficulties when he inventing bu himself,he never gave up.
By his hard work,he had a lab of his own.Than he invented electric light,one of the most important invention in his while life.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.What a great inventor Edison is!
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Do you know about Thomas Edison?The following article may give some more details about Thomas Edison.Thomas Edison was a great inveror in the world .He was born in America in 1847.When he had studied in schoolfor only three months ,her mum take he ho
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When he had studied in schoolfor only three months ,her mum take he home.改成 After he had studied in school for only three months,his mother took him home.
bu himself---- by himself
Than he invented electric light-- then he invented an electric bulb
one of the most important invention in his while life.---- one of the most important inventions in his whole life.

Do you know about Thomas Edison?The following article may give you some more details .Thomas Edison is one of the greatest inventor in the world .He was born in America in 1847.When he studied in scho...

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Do you know about Thomas Edison?The following article may give you some more details .Thomas Edison is one of the greatest inventor in the world .He was born in America in 1847.When he studied in school for only three months.Then her mum took him home.Edison studied all by himself. He was interested in science. Although he encountered many difficulties when inventing .However,he never gave up.
By his hard work,he had a lab .Then he invented electric light,which is one of the most important invention in his whole life.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.What a great inventor Edison is!

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第二段Thomas Edison was a great inventor in the world. He was born in America in 1847.When he was a child, he only studied in school for 3 months, his mother took him home, Edison studied by himself. H...

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第二段Thomas Edison was a great inventor in the world. He was born in America in 1847.When he was a child, he only studied in school for 3 months, his mother took him home, Edison studied by himself. He had many difficulties in inventing, he never gave up.
第三段 than---then, invention ---inventions while-----whole

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1Thomas Edison was a great inveror in the world .He was born in America in 1847.When改成after he had studied in school for only 2three months ,her mum take he改成him home.
3Edison studied by himself改成...

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1Thomas Edison was a great inveror in the world .He was born in America in 1847.When改成after he had studied in school for only 2three months ,her mum take he改成him home.
3Edison studied by himself改成studied at home . He was去掉was interested in science.
4the pursuit of knowledge and the spritis of Insisting made him encount many difficulties 我写了这句子
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