告示引起的刺杀2000字作文

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　　一个消息轰动了森林居民：黑猫警长要应聘助手啦！

　　嘿，能被神通广大的黑猫警长选中当助手，那该有多光彩！于是，不少乡亲都跃跃欲试地拥到了“动物公安局”门口。

　　许多人闻讯而来，“动物公安局”门口不一会儿便汇成了一片人海。

　　“咦？真的！太棒了。”白兔小姐非常开心，她想追求黑猫警长，所以她对这个应聘很感兴趣。

　　“对！我也想应聘，这可是个光彩的职业。”红眼狐狸也点了点头。

　　突然，围观者的脚下出现了一条黑细线，在慢慢移动，尽量不触碰到别的动物。

　　“嘿！老大！你觉得这内容能否以俺们对俺们所用？”原来是老鼠。

　　“你小子！难得跟老大我想到一个点子上了！这确实是个好机会，自从那头啥破猫当上了警长后就没有一秒钟好日子过。”疤面鼠鬼笑了一下。

　　鼠军师智脑鼠说：“老大，或许这是除掉黑猫警长的好机会……”

　　晚，鼠洞内。

　　“易易容，你知道我为什么叫你来吧？”疤面鼠问。

　　“智脑鼠以告诉我啦！请老大放一百二十个心！我定将助你一臂之力！”

　　“这种易容不但要改变身高、外貌、声音，你搞得了？”疤面鼠有一点怀疑。

　　“这有啥？只要这样······”易易容一诡笑。

　　“哈哈哈！这何难之有？让粗张飞来！”

　　清晨，白兔小姐家。

　　“哎呀！哎呀！急死我了！哥哥跑哪了去了！不是说好要归队参加最后的集训吗？”白兔小姐心急如焚。

　　“妹妹！我来晚了！黑兔喘着粗气。

　　“怎么迟到了？刚才去哪儿了？”白兔小姐有点儿生气。

　　“我突发奇想，也想去应聘，报名的人实在太多了！”

　　“可是，下个月不是要举行森林奥运会了吗？先不说你那样夜以继日的准备了整整四年，而且你可是旋风队里的中流砥柱呀！你难道要放弃梦想吗？”白兔妹妹一脸的惊诧。

　　黑兔不耐烦地挥挥手：“我已经做出决定了，你闭嘴吧！”

　　白兔妹妹瞪圆了双眼，她实在想不明白，一向疼爱她的哥哥今天这是怎么了？

　　午，考试厅。

　　黑猫警长上台发言：“感谢各位不辞辛劳前来参加应聘，但我们只能择优录取，祝你们成功！”

　　考卷发放完毕，白猫警士来回巡视。

　　黑兔管家飞速答题，不到十分钟便完卷。

　　白兔小姐隐感不对劲想：哥哥不是昨晚临发奇想吗？怎么答卷如此飞速，而且他为什么一定要放弃比赛？语气为何如此坚决？

　　黑兔管家正上交考卷到黑猫警长手中时，他发现黑兔身上气味不同。黑猫警长还发现了他腰上的匕首。

　　小猫警员突报：“黑猫警长！在公安局五里外发现黑兔尸体。”

　　黑猫警长拔出手枪，指着眼前的黑兔说：“你是谁？”

　　他不语，拔出匕首刺过去。

　　一团血雾喷了出来，人们大呼：“黑猫警长！”

　　可倒地的是黑兔管家。

　　原来黑猫警长及时开枪，比他快了一步。

　　考场内顿时乱了。

　　白兔小姐眼含泪珠，呜咽着说：“哥···哥哥！”

　　黑猫警长立刻吩咐：“白鸽侦探！立刻将着尸体解剖！”

　　“好！我会联系法医进行细致解剖！”

　　三天后，森林医院。

　　“什么！竟······”白兔小姐大吃一惊。

　　黑猫警长立刻吩咐：“尽可能从尸体里寻找有利消息！”

　　原来是鼠的头儿疤面鼠！

　　鼠洞内，众鼠议事。

　　智脑鼠气急败坏：“这会老大亲自出马，竟被识破，连老大也······”

　　易易容说：“现在鼠族不可一日无主，现在唯一的办法就是让智脑鼠任此大位。”

　　粗张飞大吼一声：“让他接位？凭什么！”

　　他们吵了起来，声音越来越大。

　　在一旁搜寻的警员被惊到了。

　　“有情况！”白猫警员吩咐：“你去通知黑猫警长！”

　　三分钟后，黑猫警长便火速赶到距离鼠洞一千米的空地上。

　　“笛——笛——”警笛的声音很大。

　　顺风耳隐感不对劲：“奇怪，怎么会有一种类似警笛的声音。”

　　大家停止了吵闹，智脑鼠沉思了一会，便皱起眉头：“不好！一定是黑猫警长他们！”

　　“那怎么办？”独眼龙大叫，“我可不想呆在那个令人窒息的监狱里！”

　　智脑鼠打了个响指，怪笑道：“有了？”

　　黑猫警长似乎意识到什么，说道：“快把警笛关掉，我忘记鼠族还有顺耳鼠了！”

　　“快！通知所有人前往鼠洞！”黑猫警长一声令下。

　　“刹——”许多警员立刻下车包围鼠洞，发现了一小部分老鼠，共计100只，其中有10只是杀人犯，20名吸毒、贩毒犯，剩下的70名全是畏罪潜逃的通缉犯。

　　“笛——，笛——”警笛声回响在寂静的深夜，“动物公安局”的人们个个兴高采烈，汗水已打湿了他们的衣裳。这是一个旧的结束，新的开始。当第一缕阳光照射在大地上时，迎来的，将是全新的一天……

    五年级:周康烁

英语作文之便签 告示

23、告示－通告。大纲样题。。

Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning an English Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information:

1) the purpose of the contest,

2) time and place of the contest,

3) what is required of the candidates,

4) details of the judges and awards.

You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Department of English at the end of the announcement.

English-Speaking Contest

To improve students’ ability to speak English and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of English is organizing a school-wide English-speaking contest to be held on Tuesday next week (14 January) at the Students’ Recreational Center. Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Friday this week. Five overseas teachers will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest. (96 words)

告示－通告。大纲样题。。

Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning an English Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information:

1) the purpose of the contest,

2) time and place of the contest,

3) what is required of the candidates,

4) details of the judges and awards.

You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Department of English at the end of the announcement.

English-Speaking Contest

To improve students’ ability to speak English and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of English is organizing a school-wide English-speaking contest to be held on Tuesday next week (14 January) at the Students’ Recreational Center. Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Friday this week. Five overseas teachers will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest. (96 words) The Students’ Union

Department of English

二十。新东方小作文模拟题26

告示－启示（征稿启事）

Directions: Your journal is planning to publish an issue. Write a contributions wanted which covers the following information:

1) the purpose of the issue,

2) time and methods of delivery,

3) other details.

You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.

Contributions Wanted

January 14, 2006

thTo celebrate the 12 anniversary of the Beijing New Oriental Education and Technology Group,

this journal has decided to publish a special issue on our great achievements in the teaching and research activities in the past 12 years. Articles, photos, memoirs and other writings related to this topic are invited. Faculty members and students are welcome to send in their contributions in whatever forms or styles to our office before the 30th instant. They may also send their writings and photos electronically to the following address:

考研英语小作文-备忘录、告示

考研英语小作文——备忘录 (Memo\Memorandum)

一、基本框架

一、固定格式

Date: （日期，January 14th, 2010 ）

To: （收文人，Tom，All Faculty ）

From: （发文人，Li Ming ）

Subject: （主题，Employee Training ）

二、正文：细化提纲

二、模拟题

Directions: You are Li Ming, the president of a company. Write a memorandum (memo) to Tom,

the vice-president on the employee’s training on computer, telling him the

need to train the employees, detailed information, and ask him to write a plan.

【高分范文】

Date：January 14, 2010

To：Tom, Vice President

From：Li Ming, President

Subject：Computer Training of the Staff

In order to deal with problem of the high rate of computer illiteracy of the staff, we need to

make up a plan for training our employees.

The following factors should be considered. First of all, the class runs two hours a week for

ten weeks. Furthermore, the employees should be classified into different

classes according to their current computer knowledge. Finally, the company had better put

the employees through the program in turn.

I would like you to write up a brief proposal covering above information. And you can add

other details if necessary.

【参考译文】

日期：2010 年1 月14 日

收文人：副总汤姆

发文人：总经理李明

事由：

员工计算机培训

为了解决公司员工中存在较多电脑盲的问题，我们需要制定一个员工计算机培训计划。

以下是需

要考虑的因素。首先，课程时间应为每周两小时持续十周。此外，要根据员工当前计算机知识水平划分不

同等级，并将他们分入不同班级。最后，最好是让员工轮流参加 这个项目。

我希望您起草一个涵盖以上信息的简要计划书，并可以增加一些必要的细节。

2010 小作文

Part A 真题解析

2010年考研英语（一）小作文考察了告示这种题型。在2009年10月22日教育部考试中心出版的《考

试大纲》和《考试分析》中并未提到告示，但从2004年考研大纲改革以来，历年教育部考试中心出版的《大

纲解析》一书中均详细讲解了告示的写法。2009年8月25日出版的《大纲解析》中将小作文明确分为书

信类应用文和告示类应用文两大题型，详尽分析了告示的写作方法，并提供了六篇告示范文。

这再次证明了考研写作的反押题倾向，命题者重在考查考生的实际英语水平，经常与考生预测逆向思维，

反其道而行之。针对2011年及之后的考研写作复习，希望考生扎扎实实提高英语写作实力，杜绝侥幸和押

题心理，对于书信、摘要、告示、备忘录、报告等大纲提及的题型均应仔细复习，以不变应万变。

大家如果参加过新东方的培训，我的强化班和基础班写作讲义中均提供了告示范文。拙著《2010考研英语高分写作》94页至99页详尽解析了告示的写法，并提供了六篇范文；118页小作文十大必背范文

通知告示类英语作文

通知告示类英语作文

一. 书面通知

1. A Brief Introduction

1) What is a notice?

As an effective means of written communication, a notice gives information published by the appropriate authority. It is intended to publicize social events, to report on matters of general interest to staff, to inform staff of instructions, change of plan, new systems and regulations, and to make the staff conform to certain arrangements, etc.

一般告示类文体都需要写标题，如Notice或者Announcement。告示类文体主要用于说明或者传达某件事情、某项活动等，重在言简意赅。如果是关于活动的通知，需要说明活动的内容、时间、地点、参加人员范围以及其它必要细节。请注意通知的三大要素：1）时间；2）地点；3）内容。

书面通知或告示应在题头中间写“Notice” ，最后右下方写出通知的单位或者个人。

2) How to write a notice?

The heading of the notice is usually in the middle of the page, in boldfaced words. For example,

NOTICE

ENGLISH EVENING LECTURE

1) The main information such as time, place, should be made distinct.

2) Give the name of the person who gives the notice.

3) Give the date when the notice is issued if necessary.

3) A notice should be:

1)Attractive (so that people will NOTICE it)

2)Simple and easy-to-read

3)Clear and specific

2. Some Samples

Sometimes a notice can be as

simple as:

注：这3个图片的通知也是海报。

MEETING NOTICE April 12, 2010 A review of status of implementation of Right to Information Act, covering the following topics, will be held on April 17, 2010 (Saturday) at 11:00 AM in the Main Auditorium:

1. Review of state for uploading of manuals — shortcomings 2. Review of status for online filing of applications 3. Latest developments about implementation of RTI Act and identification of problem areas.

All the Public Information Officers / officers responsible for implementation of the RTI Act are requested to make it convenient to attend the said program.

DEPUTY DIRECTOR

Notice

All the students will go and visit No.2 Car Factory on Monday, October 8th. In the

3. Some Exercises

Exercise 1：As a member of the Students'

Union, you want to hold a special lecture. Write a notice to the students to inform: 1）The topic of the lecture；2）Time and place；3）The professor who will give the lecture.

Special Lecture Notice

May 20, 2010

Title：Impact of 2008 Global Financial Crisis

Speaker: Prof. John Betts, University of Technology Sydney

Time：6:00-9:00 PM, May 27, 2010

Place: Multimedia Classroom on 6th floor, Yifu Building

Sponsored by the Students’ Union

Exercise 2

Directions: Suppose you are an secretary of the English Department of X University. Write a notice to inform the teachers and students of this department of a lecture on crosscultural studies.You should write about 120 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming"

instead.

Notice

There is going to be a lecture, titled "Across Cultures: Digital Media and Literate Activity", in the meeting room of the English Department from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. on Monday, July 11th. The lecture will be given by Professor Robert Johnson, who is from the Department of Englsih Literature of University of Pennsylvania. Professor Johnson is known for his unique probing of the many connections between literate activity and new information technologies. He will present, in his humorous style, the relation he found between culture and technological development, which you surely will enjoy very much.

All the teachers and students are welcome to attend this lecture.

English Department

通知：7月11日周一上午9点至11点将在英语系会议室举办一场题为"跨越文化：数码媒体和文化活动"的讲座。主讲人为罗伯特.约翰逊教授，来自宾西法尼亚大学的英语文学系。约翰逊教授对文化活动和新的信息技术之间的关系做了非常独到的研究，并因此而闻名。他将以幽默的风格展示他在文化和技术发展之间关系上的研究成果，相信你们都会很感兴趣。欢迎广大师生来参加本次讲座。英语系

Exercise 3

Directions: The famous opera "Cat"

will be presented the theatre of your university You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming"

instead.

Notice

Due to bad weather condition, the badminton competition, organized by the College Badminton Club, will not be held in the "May Fouth"

Field as it was scheduled. Instead, it will be moved to the Haidian Gymnasium, which is about ten mininutes'

walk from the university. All club members, competitors, and audience students will meet in front of the West Gate of the university at 9:00 a.m., June 5th, to go there togehter. For those who will go by themselves, please refer to the map in below. The event will be last from 9:30 a.m. to 11:30 a. m. Cold drinks and snacks will be provided in the gymnasium.

College Badminton Club

通知：由于天气状况不佳，学院羽毛球俱乐部举办的羽毛球比赛原定于在五四运动场的计划将取消。活动将转移到距离学校10分钟路程的海淀体育馆举办。所有的俱乐部成员、参赛者、学生观众将于6月5日上午9点在学校的西门集合，一起前往体育馆。单独前往的同学，请参考下面的地图。活动时间为9：30到11：30。我们将在体育馆中提供冷饮和零食。学院羽毛球俱乐部。

Exercise 4

Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information:

1、比赛目的、时间、地点； 2、参赛者的要求； 3、裁判和奖励的细节。

You should write about 120 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement. Chinese Speaking Contest

Notice

December 22, 2007

To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (29 December) at the Students’ Auditorium. Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.

The Students’ Union Department

of Chinese Language and Literature

Exercise 5

Directions: The Students'

Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information:

1、the purpose of the contest；2、time and place of the contest；

3、what is required of the candidates；4、details of the judges and awards.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.

Chinese Speaking Contest

February 3, 2007 To improve students'

ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students'

Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (10 February) at the Students'

Auditorium. Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest. The Students'

Union Department

of Chinese Language and Literature

附：万能句型：

There is going to be a lecture, titled... in the meeting room of ...from 10:00 to 12:00 on Monday, July 11th.

...which you surely will enjoy very much.

All the teachers and students are welcome to attend this lecture.

二. 口头通知

口头通知的开头应有称呼语，如“Attention, please！”、“Boys and girls”、“Ladies and gentleman” …等，或提醒听众注意的表达，如“May I have your attention, please！”结尾用“Thank you”。同时要注意通知的三大要素：1）时间；2）地点；3）内容。

1. 广播稿( 海啸) west part of Indonesia, which brought on a terrible tsunami to some areas of western Asia. This disaster has caused millions of deaths and destroyed many beautiful cities. How terrible things are! Besides, millions more who have become homeless are in great need of help now.

At present many countries all over the world including China have sent rescue teams there and thousands of people in every corner of the world are donating money to show their concern for them.

It is true that many natural disasters can’t be avoided sometimes. But at least we can do something to help the people in the tsunami-hit areas. So let’s offer our pocket money to them!

2. 机场通知

Because of the terrible weather, we have to change some of our plans.

The airport will be closed for about 12 hours. We are very sorry. Flight 1536 from Tokyo will be late for five hours and Flight 7270 to Shanghai will be late for 12 hours and we will provide free food and hotel service.

The tourist flight to Washington will take off at Hilton Airport. A bus will go there one hour later.

三、启事

寻物启事是失主为寻找丢失的物件而写的一种公告性的应用文。它的主要格式有4个部分：

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怎样才能把记叙文内容写具体呢？内容具体形象，是记叙文最基本的要求，只有具体形象地写人叙事、写景状物，才能强烈地感染读者。那么，怎样才能把记叙文内容写具体呢？

(1)善于观察 绘形传神: 写人，让人物“活”起来，让人物的动作、话语、思想呈现在读者面前。

比如，你要写一个人上楼梯很艰难，却只用“他每次上楼梯都很艰难”这样的话语来概述，读者就无从知道“怎样艰难”，“他上楼梯与别人上楼梯有什么不同”等具体情况了。如果写成：“他上楼梯前，双手抓住扶手站稳后，伸开右手托住右腿放在台阶上，再托起左腿扶上台阶，上一级台阶，重复一次。每挪动一步，他都要咬紧牙关。

”这段文字虽然没有出现“艰难”的字眼，但读者似乎看到了这个人上楼梯艰难的情景。写景，让景物“动”起来，使其具有人的情态，或呈现出自然的形态、天然的色质。比如，《从百草园到三味书屋》一文的主题是要表达对美好自由生活的向往，所以对百草园中的菜畦、石井栏、树木花草、藤蔓、小虫、小鸟，从静态到动态，从颜色到形状再到味道一一进行细致的描绘，一个普普通通的小园子在作者笔下充满了生机和欢乐，即使那些原本在生活中并不惹人喜爱的蜈蚣、斑蟊，也变得充满情趣。作者对自由快乐生活的向往之情，就洋溢在了文章的字里行间。假如只有“百草园在那时却是我的乐园”这样很笼统地表述，文章还有感染力吗？

描写具体来自仔细观察。对每一个描写对象的观察，都可以从感觉、视觉、触觉、味觉、嗅觉五个方面入手。例如：对一根头发的观察。

“我轻轻从妈妈衣襟上拣起一根头发，银白银白的(视觉)，似乎还带着妈妈的体温 (感觉)，拿在手上有一些粗糙的感觉(触觉)，放到鼻尖子上有一股厨房的味道(嗅觉)。

”只要调动所有感官，细心体察，就能描写得逼真、细腻，使文章具体形象，摇曳生辉了。

(2)不断追问 凸现特征写文章时，边写边问自己有关人和事“怎么样了”，抓住引起人物和事件变化的前因后果，把故事的来龙去脉一步步追问清楚。俄国作家陀思妥夫斯基曾举出这样一个例子：“有个小银元落在地上”，他认为这话不够具体，应改为：“有个小银元，从桌上滚了下来，在地上叮叮当当地跳着。

”为何要这样改呢？因为它具体形象地回答了：从哪里落的？怎样落的？落地后的响声、动态怎样？

如果我们写“夕阳西下”，这样来追问：夕阳依着什么落下去的？怎样落的？给大地带来了什么变化？就可以写成：“红彤彤的太阳，紧贴着崇山峻岭，一步三回头，慢慢下坠，万道余晖撒满大地。爷爷的白胡子变成金胡子了，房子的白墙变成红的了，柳树的枝条变成黄的了。”“夕阳西下”这一情景就更具体，更形象，更有色彩和气势了。写一次活动，也可以边写边问：活动地点在哪里？天气、环境怎样？活动的内容是什么？同学们干得怎样？

谁表现得最好？为什么最好，到底是怎样干的？干的结果如何？这样一步步追问，就能具体地追出人物肖像、动作、语言、心理，事件的起因、发展、经过、结果和重点景物的形状、颜色、动态、声音、气味。

(3)细致刻画 捕捉细节运用细节描写，把文章写得具体生动。所谓细节，是指所记人、事、景中的细枝末节，如人物在生活中细小的事件、环境中细小的事物等等。

《儒林外史》中的严监生临死前“伸”出两根指头，示意家人将油灯的灯芯由两根改为一根，最终使其成了世界文学名著人物画廊中的又一个吝啬鬼的典型。在咸亨酒店的九尺柜台上，穷困潦倒的孔乙己一时得意，“排出”九文大钱，写出了他的可笑。阿Q在自己的死刑判决书上画押，阿Q不会写字，就用画圈代替：“阿Q伏下去，使尽了平生的力画圆圈。他生怕被人笑话，立志要画得圆，但这可恶的笔不但很沉重，并且不听话，刚刚一抖一抖的几乎要合缝，却又向外一耸，画成瓜子模样了。

”阿Q就在这“画圈”中糊里糊涂结束了自己生命。捕捉生活中真实而典型的“一言一动之微，一沙一石之细”(朱自清语)，就能使人物个性在举手投足之间闪闪发光，就会使描写对象栩栩如生，具体感人。

怎样刻画细节呢？一是撷取小动作，准确地使用传神的动词。如：《凡卡》中描写他给爷爷写信：“他想了一想，蘸一蘸墨水，写上地址：‘乡下爷爷收’。然后他抓抓脑袋，再想一想，添上几个字。

‘康司坦丁﹒玛卡里奇’”。“想”、“蘸”、“写”、“抓”、“添”这一系列动作，把不会写信的凡卡渴望爷爷收到信，救他出火坑的复杂心理刻画得淋漓尽致。动作描写是刻画人物，刻画人物是为了表达中心。因此紧紧围绕文章的中心，仔细观察，精心选择，具体描写，就成了写好人物动作的关键。二是勾勒小景物，突出景物的特征、状态。如：《听潮》一文中，作者把海浪声化作具体形象的画面：“海在我的脚下沉吟着，诗人一般。那声音仿佛是朦胧的月光和玫瑰的晨雾那样温柔；又像是情人的蜜语那样芳醇；低低地，轻轻地，像微风拂过琴弦；像落花飘在水上。”作者抓住海浪声轻柔的特点，展开联想，巧妙地运用比喻描绘声态，有声有色，有形有味，给人一种含蓄而鲜明的柔美感。三是抓住小道具，突出小道具独特的含义及其对情节发展的作用。如：《孔乙己》一文中，咸亨酒店三次出现的小粉板。没有小粉板，也就没有掌柜的在“端午”和“年关”想到孔乙己。小粉板上的酒债，是这场悲剧尾声中一个令人闻之泣血的音符，孔乙己的悲剧用一笔酒债告示结束了，让世人永远深思。

同学们在中考之前抓住以上几点认真训练，在考场上就能得心应手地写出内容具体、形象生动的感人文章了。

3.失分会诊

不同的文体，其内容上的失分形式不尽相同，下面分别说明。

记叙文(包括童话、寓言、故事新编)：只是简单叙事，没有具体过程。叙事没有中心，东拉西扯，故事不完整。造成以上问题的原因是一些同学不懂得讲故事的要素，一件事总得有一个发展过程，开端、发展、高潮、结局四个环节缺一不可。可是许多同学写的文章往往只见开头、结局，中间的过程太简单，这样就显得内容不具体、不充实。再者，有的同学在一篇文章里写了好几件事情，但每件事都是蜻蜓点水，一带而过，文章自然无法充实起来。

议论文(包括议论性散文)：空谈口号，说大话，没有具体的典型事例和精确的理论论据。造成这种情况的原因很简单，记忆的材料太少，肚子里没有“货”，只好空谈了。也有另外一种情况，有的同学喜欢举一些“我的同学”、“我的邻居”一类的事例，这些例子由于缺乏典型性，虽然勉强算得上有“内容”，但离“内容充实”就差得远了。

4.提升要诀

写记叙文请你记住两点：一是写好一件事，记好一个人。要写出事件的开端、发展、高潮、结局四个阶段，开端、结局尽量简洁，发展、高潮施以重墨。二是突出描写，用描写充实内容。一件事若是简单地叙述就无法做到具体充实，而运用各种描写方法进行细节描写就能使文章塑造的人物生动形象，故事完整，曲折感人。

写议论文请你注意两点：一是要有充足的论据。没有论据，文章是无法达到充实的，要善于运用时空联系的方法广泛联系素材，充实文章内容。二是学会剖析论证，一篇文章光把材料堆砌在一起无法达到内容具体充实，列举材料之后还必须有细致的剖析论证，论证时可以采用因果论证、假设论证的方法去分析。

二、【考题回放】

1.一粒种子顶开岩石，破土而出，表现的是坚韧不屈、生机勃勃的力量；一位老师投来关怀的一瞥，是激励你克服困难、勇往直前的力量。力量有时是一句话，当你遭遇挫折时，它给你带来无穷的勇气；力量有时是一本书，当你困惑彷徨时，它会拨开你心灵的迷雾；力量也可以是长辈的一次批评，妈妈的一个电话，父亲的一根白发，同桌的一张卡片，邻里的一声问候??

请以“力量”为话题，联系自己的学习、生活实际，自拟题目作文。

要求：①立意自定，文体自选。②600字左右。③书写工整，卷面整洁。④文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

(2005年重庆市中考作文题)

2.同学们，我们的成长过程，就是战胜自我的过程，高尚战胜了卑劣，勤奋战胜了懒惰，勇敢战胜了怯懦，面对战胜了逃避，快乐战胜了忧伤??于是，我们才有了一次次进步。在你的生活、学习中这样的精彩例子一定不少，请把它写出来，让我们一起分享，好吗？请以“战胜自我”为话题作文。标题自拟，文体自选，立意自定。不得出现人名、校名。字数在600字左右。

(2005年四川南充市中考作文题)

三、【作文展台】

1.失误文剖析

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