bec高级写作技巧

篇一：BEC高级写作实用技巧以及真题范文

图表作文写作要领

（1）注意总-分结构的使用。中心句概括总趋势。

总增长：

典型数据/区间：there are some fluctuations to this general trend;

Within this general trend, there are some fluctuations, for

example…

（2）注意分水岭的描写,即把整个图表的变化趋势分成两个或三个变化阶段来整体描写。

（3）注意语言的多样化，多用同义词替代，避免重复用词。

（4）注意数据的内部逻辑关系，确定描写线索。即确定以某个数据的变化来贯彻全文。 图表作文句型总结：

1. 基本功: 叙述表格/图表(重点)

(1)组成： consist of.., be made up of.., be composed of..,

(2)比例： account for%, represent%, make/take up %.., 或者直接说 % of….

(3)上升(by..to…)，增加，提高：

a. 普通：increase, grow, rise, expand

b. 渐渐上升：climb, edge up, ascend, trend up.

c. 猛增，激增：jump, surge, soar, proliferate (数量), leap, shot up

d. 词组： achieve an increase in….by…to…

Continue its upwards trend; trend up

On the rise, on the increase.

On consecutive rise: 保持连续增长

n. 名词： increase, rise, growth, expansion,

ascendance渐渐增加,

slight increase, rise, growth in..

bump-up(突然增加), proliferation(激增),jump, leap, surge, boom

(4)减少，下降，减缓

a. 普通：decrease, fall, drop, reduce, shrink, (shrinkage)

b. 逐渐变少：slide, dwindle, decline, edge down

c. 骤减：collapse, slump, plummet, plunge

d. 经济衰退，停顿：slump, collapse, stagnate, stagnant, stagnation,

sluggish, sluggishness, slack,

crisis, recession, slowdown, downturn,

e. 词组： fall off, drop off, go down, continue its downward trend, trend down,

on the decline, on the downturn.

(5) 保持平稳，不变：

Remain stable,/steady,/unchanged

Level off vi 上升，或减退至平稳水平

Subside vi 减退至平稳水平 standstill n/adj 停滞不前

(6) 起伏波动：

Rise and fall,

fluctuate slightly/dramatically,

fluctuate between….and…, a minor fluctuation,

small rises and falls/fluctuations.

(7)形容趋势程度

a. 剧烈，显著，明显

Dramatically, sharply, considerably, rapidly, suddenly, greatly, alarmingly,

significantly, enormously, steeply, massively, incredibly, hugely, amazingly,

substantially; at an alarming rate; by a wide margin.

b. 缓慢/逐渐

Gradually, steadily, slightly, gently, marginally, slowly, moderately, in a

moderate way, by the least amount.

(8)表示倍数：

a. (使)增几倍于： double, triple, quadruple【'kw?drupl】，

b. adv.adj 几倍的，几倍地：fivefold, sixfold, sevenfold….

c. ad. 几倍： twice, three/four/five times….

e. 几分之几： 2/3： two-thirds, etc. (at a fraction of…)

(9) 比较数据as…as…

a. three/four times as many. 做主语或定语成分

Eg. approx.20% more people preferred the diet cherry version and nearly three

times as many preferred the diet strawberry version.

b.―A + be + XX times + as +adj + as + B‖。

eg. This tree is three times as tall as that one.

Eg. His father is twice as old as he.

c.―A + be + XXtimes + 计量形容词比较级 + than + B ‖

eg. The Yangtze River is almost twice longer than the Pearl River.

=The Yangtze River is almost three times as long as Pearl River.

Eg. The dictionary is exactly five times more expensive than that one.

d. .―A + be + 倍数 + the + 计量名词 + of + B ‖

eg. The newly broadened square is four times the size of the previous one. 新扩建的广场是未扩建时的四倍大。

e.―The + 计量名词 + of + A + be + 倍数 + that + of + B ‖

eg. The size of the newly broadened square is four times that of the previous

one.

(10) 从不同方面分析数据; in view of the turnover…., In terms of growth,…就营业额

方面来说。。。，就增长方面来说；

2. 描述时间点或时间段

（1）时期泛指 :over the period XXX to XXX, over the years XXX to XXX, from XX to xx; over/during the past XX years; in the last XX years(最近X年)， over the last 15 to 20 years. in the next XX years, during a XX-year/month/week period, throughout.., all the way through, for the year..XXX.

(2) 时期特指：during the same period, over the period in question, over/during the period studied, for the rest of the periods studied, in the two subsequent periods, in the following period, all the way through,

(3)连续下降/上升的某个时期：it is the second/third/fourth consecutive quarter/year/month/week that XXX has fallen

(4) 时间点: until, by the year XXX, since, from the year XXX, up to now, at a

given moment, over the period ended on xx/ended in XX

(5)年代：during the 1980s; during the 70s and 80s.,

3. 开头： this graph/report describes/outlines/shows/compare… with…/suggests,

4. 总趋势句型

(1)If we look at the growth in…, we can see there is a steady increase in XX from.. to…/a rise in XX of XXX…

(2)from the graph, we can see there is…./ if we taking the XX first, we can see that there is …

(3)XX was on consecutive growth on the whole over the period in question (except… )

(4)XX shows a relatively steady/upward/downward trend in the last XX years.

(5)XX shows a trajectory of growth/fall….

(6)xx, on the other hand, shows a different trend.

(7)XXX has been growing consistently with XX in the past XX years.

(8)XXX witnessed/saw some rise and fall/fluctuations over the period…

(9)during the same period, XX also rose, but fluctuated greatly.

(10)XX didn‘t vary much and remained just over/below xx Or between..and..

(11)XX shows the same performance/trend although at level 4bn higher than imports.

5. 增长幅度、增长额

(1).., there is a rise in XX of XX/by xx%/from..to…

(2)The figure shows a rise of XX within the whole period and no fluctuations are

to be remarked.

(3)XX rose from…to…, suffering minor fluctuations all the way through.

(4)XX increased slightly/rose steadily. etc , ending the period around XX over

their starting level.

6. 最大涨/跌幅，最高点，最低点

(1) XXX with the biggest increase/decrease coming between…and…,

(2) It went up to the (7-year etc.) peak at….in…. /

(3) The XXX peaked at.. in…./reached/hit a peak in …./peaking at…

(4) The XX rose to the highest, climbed to a seven-month high, (price etc.)advanced to a record $1000 on….,

(5)the XX rose/surge/climb to XXX, the highest since….

(6)骤升shot-up, surge, rocket, upsurge, uplift, proliferation soar, boom 骤降：slump, plunge, plummet(vi), nose-dive vi

5. 起始点

(1)starting off at…./from, sales will increase to.. during…, and remain stable at

during…, only to decrease to… during.

(2)During XXX, it started around XX in the first quarter…

6. 典型数据/区间

(1)Profits will shop up dramatically to 2,000 in 2004, from which it will go up steadily from year to year…

(2)It will go down to the lowest at …in … where it will begin to pick up/rebound/

(3)From 1985 to 1997, XXX were between XX and XXX.

(4)After… the XX increased/decreased significantly.

(5)the xxx rose up steadily until….

(6)however, there are some fluctuations to this general/within this general trend, for example….

7. 描写fluctuations

(1)from/starting off at…, XXX increased to.. during.. and remain stable at.. during.., only to decrease to.. during…

(2)XXX increased/soared from xx to XXX in… followed by a sharp drop to…in…

(3)soar again, fall back to, drop back to…and then maintained this position throughout ….

(4)it started around XX in xx, increased slowly to XX in.., and then fell to XXat the end of the year.

(5)It stayed stable at around XX during xxx and xxx, then decreased to XXX in…,before recovering at/to XXX at the end of …

8. 对比，比例的描写

(1)倍数关系描写（见1）;

(2)分数关系：one/a fifth of, 8 out of 10, at a fraction of…

(3)组成：consist of, be made up of…, be composed of…

(4)比例： account for.., represent, take up..,

(5)对比：compared to, in comparison with…, relative to…, the ratio is….

Eg. Female executives dominate in the age group between 24 and 39, where the ratio is 42 to 10. (The first representing the number of women and latter, men ). Eg. It decreases half in group 60 to 69 where 10 women hold top position in comparison to/with 21 men.

Eg. The graphs shows the number of cars per 100 people over the period 1980 to 2020 relative to the growth of the world‘s population.

9. 大小的比较

(1)差：spread(差价), margin, split, difference,

差额为正/负：xxx remained positive/negative

(2)占多数，a. XXX dominate in the XX group/amongst….

b. In the age range above…, XXX are in /sliding / majority.

(3)超过: a. XXX exceeded/outstrippedXXX but not by the same margin, b. XXX exceeded XX by XX percent, outnumber xxx by XXX.

c. exceed XX-level. With the earnings exceeding XXX.

(4) 比例相等：a. an equal number of both…and…

b. XXX take an equal proportion in ….

(5) 从小到大描述数据：followed by

Eg. 44% of our sales income came from US, followed by Europe(26%), and

south America(19%)

(6)排序的描写： ranked No.1/2; The second /third largest…; be in the

first/second/third place.

10. 表示预测的句子; be likely to…/is expected to…./is supposed to…/is estimated

to../is projected to…/will/will be

11. 叙述受访者态度

(1)XXX received XX positive responses and XX negative responses..

(2) XX people gave a positive response/comment on..

(3)Asked about…., XX people responded positively/negatively whereas XX

people say sth negative about it.

(4) XX of xx respondents complained about….while XX though it positively,

/thought it to be satisfactory

12. Distribution

(1) xx%, more than half XX, XX out of XX…

(2) the respondents are almost equally divided between XXX and XX(different stances)

(3)XX and xxx take a similar proportion in XX group/range

13. data and compare的中心句

(1)The company employs almost an equal number of executives of both sexes. However, there are remarkable differences depending on the age range considered.

(2)The overall result of this international survey on planned IT expenditure for the next year shows significant differences between Europe and Aisa.

(3)The situation in XX, however, is quite different.

(4)however, the XX vary greatly on the XX…

篇二：BEC高级作文指导

商务英语BEC高级写作部分综合指导(一)

写作部分

BEC HIGHER写作部分主要涉及商业信函和图表写作两部分的内容，现具体介绍如下：

商业信函

第一章 格式问题

1. 格式问题：

请同学们在BEC的写作中采用平头式的写法。

收信人的姓名和地址置于信纸的左上方

地址、称呼和结束礼词后没有标点符号

日期在右上方

段落从定格开始，段落之间的行距为两行（但在考试中由于受答题卡限制，请同学们酌情考虑）

写信人的名字和头衔在签名下方

2. 称呼和结束礼词的注意事项：

称呼的写法遵循下列原则：

Dear Sir or Madam写信给某一公司，不确定具体的收信人

Dear Sir 对男士，但是你不知道他的具体姓名 Dear Madam 对女士，但是你不知道他的具体姓名

Dear Mr Smith 对男士

Dear Ms Smith 对已婚或未婚的女士

Dear Mrs Smith 对已婚女士

Dear Miss Smith对未婚女士

Dear John (此处John 为英语中常用男名)对朋友或你比较熟悉的人（通常为多年生意伙伴）

称呼与结束礼词存在对应的关系，请同学们特别注意：

Dear Sir or Madam Yours faithfully

Dear Mr/Ms/Mrs/Miss Smith Yours sincerely

Dear John Best wishes

以下均为错误用法：

Dear Mr John

Dear Mr John Smith

3. 日期：

在英国英语中，天在前，但是在美国英语中，月份在前。所以某些特别的时期容易引起误解。例如：12 06 2003

在英国指的是：6月21日

在美国指的是：12月6日

因此日期要写成：12 June 2003

商务英语BEC高级写作部分综合指导(二)

要记住月份使用大些字母开头。天后不必写th、rd、nd或者st。

预备参加bec考试的同学们由于缺乏商务写作的实际经验，对于写作部分都比较郁闷。恩波结合历年考试实际，为大家准备了15类共计50个经典的实战句型，供大家在考场上使用。我们对每一个句型都模拟了一种环境：

1. 信件的开头：

We are writing to enquire about…

We are writing in connection with…

We are interested in … and we would like to know…

环境：

You want to know the prices of some air conditioners.

We are interested in your air conditioner and we would like to know the prices of some air conditioners.

You saw an advertisement in the newspaper yesterday and you want further information.

We are writing in connection with the advertisement in the newspaper yesterday.

You want to know if the company you are writing to organizes holidays to Africa.

We are writing to inquire about the holidays to Africa that your company organizes.

2. 回信的开头：

Thank you for your letter of (date)

We have received your letter of (date)

asking if …

enquiring about …

enclosing …

concerning …

环境：

A company wrote to you on 23 July. They wanted to know if you sell photocopiers.

Thank you for your letter of 23 July, asking if we sell photocopiers.

A man wrote to you on 18 December. He wanted employment with your company. He also sent his curriculum vitae.

We have received your letter of 18 December, enclosing your curriculum vitae.

A company sent you a fax on 3 June. They wanted to know if you were going(来自:WwW.ZW2.CN 爱作文 网) to the marketing conference in London.

Thank you for your fax of 3 June, asking if I was going to the marketing conference in London.

A woman telephoned you this morning. She wanted to know if her order No. 599 had arrived.

Thank you for your telephone call this morning concerning the order No. 599.

3. 信件的结尾：

一般结尾：

I look forward to receiving your reply/order/products/ect.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

如果你在信件中提供了信息：

I hope that this information will help you.

Please contact me if you need any further information.

Please feel free to contact me if you have any further questions.

Please let me know if you need any further information.

4. 引入主题：

With reference to …

Further to …

With regard to …

I am writing in connection with …

注：引入主题的句子可以被写在信件的开头，但with regard to 不能用于信件的开头。

环境：(how would you start a letter about each of the following?)

an invoice (No. 679) for a photocopier

With reference to Invoice No. 679, we regret to tell you that the product arrived in bad condition.

a meeting you had with the addressee on Jan. 16th

Further to the meeting on 16 January, I am delighted to tell you that we are now able to give you a special offer for our Peach Series computer.

an advertisement in the times newspaper

I am writing in connection with the advertisement in the times newspaper yesterday.

an application for a post as secretary in your company

I am writing in connection with your application for a post as secretary in our company.

a fax order for six computers that you received today

with reference to your fax order for six computer, I regret to tell you that they are out of stock at present.

5. 告知好、坏消息：

好消息：

I ampleasedto tell you that …

delightedinform

happy advise

篇三：BEC高级写作实用技巧以及真题范文

图表作文写作要领

（1）注意总-分结构的使用。中心句概括总趋势。

总增长：

典型数据/区间：there are some fluctuations to this general trend;

Within this general trend, there are some fluctuations, for

example…

（2）注意分水岭的描写,即把整个图表的变化趋势分成两个或三个变化阶段来整体描写。

（3）注意语言的多样化，多用同义词替代，避免重复用词。

（4）注意数据的内部逻辑关系，确定描写线索。即确定以某个数据的变化来贯彻全文。 图表作文句型总结：

1. 基本功: 叙述表格/图表(重点)

(1)组成： consist of.., be made up of.., be composed of..,

(2)比例： account for%, represent%, make/take up %.., 或者直接说 % of….

(3)上升(by..to…)，增加，提高：

a. 普通：increase, grow, rise, expand

b. 渐渐上升：climb, edge up, ascend, trend up.

c. 猛增，激增：jump, surge, soar, proliferate (数量), leap, shot up

d. 词组： achieve an increase in….by…to…

Continue its upwards trend; trend up

On the rise, on the increase.

On consecutive rise: 保持连续增长

n. 名词： increase, rise, growth, expansion,

ascendance渐渐增加,

slight increase, rise, growth in..

bump-up(突然增加), proliferation(激增),jump, leap, surge, boom

(4)减少，下降，减缓

a. 普通：decrease, fall, drop, reduce, shrink, (shrinkage)

b. 逐渐变少：slide, dwindle, decline, edge down

c. 骤减：collapse, slump, plummet, plunge

d. 经济衰退，停顿：slump, collapse, stagnate, stagnant, stagnation,

sluggish, sluggishness, slack,

crisis, recession, slowdown, downturn,

e. 词组： fall off, drop off, go down, continue its downward trend, trend down,

on the decline, on the downturn.

(5) 保持平稳，不变：

Remain stable,/steady,/unchanged

Level off vi 上升，或减退至平?a href="http://www.zw2.cn/zhuanti/guanyurenzuowen/" target="_blank" class="keylink">人?/p>

Subside vi 减退至平稳水平 standstill n/adj 停滞不前

(6) 起伏波动：

Rise and fall,

fluctuate slightly/dramatically,

fluctuate between….and…, a minor fluctuation,

small rises and falls/fluctuations.

(7)形容趋势程度

a. 剧烈，显著，明显

Dramatically, sharply, considerably, rapidly, suddenly, greatly, alarmingly,

significantly, enormously, steeply, massively, incredibly, hugely, amazingly,

substantially; at an alarming rate; by a wide margin.

b. 缓慢/逐渐

Gradually, steadily, slightly, gently, marginally, slowly, moderately, in a

moderate way, by the least amount.

(8)表示倍数：

a. (使)增几倍于： double, triple, quadruple【'kw?drupl】，

b. adv.adj 几倍的，几倍地：fivefold, sixfold, sevenfold….

c. ad. 几倍： twice, three/four/five times….

e. 几分之几： 2/3： two-thirds, etc. (at a fraction of…)

(9) 比较数据as…as…

a. three/four times as many. 做主语或定语成分

Eg. approx.20% more people preferred the diet cherry version and nearly three

times as many preferred the diet strawberry version.

b.―A + be + XX times + as +adj + as + B‖。

eg. This tree is three times as tall as that one.

Eg. His father is twice as old as he.

c.―A + be + XXtimes + 计量形容词比较级 + than + B ‖

eg. The Yangtze River is almost twice longer than the Pearl River.

=The Yangtze River is almost three times as long as Pearl River.

Eg. The dictionary is exactly five times more expensive than that one.

d. .―A + be + 倍数 + the + 计量名词 + of + B ‖

eg. The newly broadened square is four times the size of the previous one. 新扩建的广场是未扩建时的四倍大。

e.―The + 计量名词 + of + A + be + 倍数 + that + of + B ‖

eg. The size of the newly broadened square is four times that of the previous

one.

(10) 从不同方面分析数据; in view of the turnover…., In terms of growth,…就营业额

方面来说。。。，就增长方面来说；

2. 描述时间点或时间段

（1）时期泛指 :over the period XXX to XXX, over the years XXX to XXX, from XX to xx; over/during the past XX years; in the last XX years(最近X年)， over the last 15 to 20 years. in the next XX years, during a XX-year/month/week period, throughout.., all the way through, for the year..XXX.

(2) 时期特指：during the same period, over the period in question, over/during the period studied, for the rest of the periods studied, in the two subsequent periods, in the following period, all the way through,

(3)连续下降/上升的某个时期：it is the second/third/fourth consecutive quarter/year/month/week that XXX has fallen

(4) 时间点: until, by the year XXX, since, from the year XXX, up to now, at a

given moment, over the period ended on xx/ended in XX

(5)年代：during the 1980s; during the 70s and 80s.,

3. 开头： this graph/report describes/outlines/shows/compare… with…/suggests,

4. 总趋势句型

(1)If we look at the growth in…, we can see there is a steady increase in XX from.. to…/a rise in XX of XXX…

(2)from the graph, we can see there is…./ if we taking the XX first, we can see that there is …

(3)XX was on consecutive growth on the whole over the period in question (except… )

(4)XX shows a relatively steady/upward/downward trend in the last XX years.

(5)XX shows a trajectory of growth/fall….

(6)xx, on the other hand, shows a different trend.

(7)XXX has been growing consistently with XX in the past XX years.

(8)XXX witnessed/saw some rise and fall/fluctuations over the period…

(9)during the same period, XX also rose, but fluctuated greatly.

(10)XX didn‘t vary much and remained just over/below xx Or between..and..

(11)XX shows the same performance/trend although at level 4bn higher than imports.

5. 增长幅度、增长额

(1).., there is a rise in XX of XX/by xx%/from..to…

(2)The figure shows a rise of XX within the whole period and no fluctuations are

to be remarked.

(3)XX rose from…to…, suffering minor fluctuations all the way through.

(4)XX increased slightly/rose steadily. etc , ending the period around XX over

their starting level.

6. 最大涨/跌幅，最高点，最低点

(1) XXX with the biggest increase/decrease coming between…and…,

(2) It went up to the (7-year etc.) peak at….in…. /

(3) The XXX peaked at.. in…./reached/hit a peak in …./peaking at…

(4) The XX rose to the highest, climbed to a seven-month high, (price etc.)advanced to a record $1000 on….,

(5)the XX rose/surge/climb to XXX, the highest since….

(6)骤升shot-up, surge, rocket, upsurge, uplift, proliferation soar, boom 骤降：slump, plunge, plummet(vi), nose-dive vi

5. 起始点

(1)starting off at…./from, sales will increase to.. during…, and remain stable at

during…, only to decrease to… during.

(2)During XXX, it started around XX in the first quarter…

6. 典型数据/区间

(1)Profits will shop up dramatically to 2,000 in 2004, from which it will go up steadily from year to year…

(2)It will go down to the lowest at …in … where it will begin to pick up/rebound/

(3)From 1985 to 1997, XXX were between XX and XXX.

(4)After… the XX increased/decreased significantly.

(5)the xxx rose up steadily until….

(6)however, there are some fluctuations to this general/within this general trend, for example….

7. 描写fluctuations

(1)from/starting off at…, XXX increased to.. during.. and remain stable at.. during.., only to decrease to.. during…

(2)XXX increased/soared from xx to XXX in… followed by a sharp drop to…in…

(3)soar again, fall back to, drop back to…and then maintained this position throughout ….

(4)it started around XX in xx, increased slowly to XX in.., and then fell to XXat the end of the year.

(5)It stayed stable at around XX during xxx and xxx, then decreased to XXX in…,before recovering at/to XXX at the end of …

8. 对比，比例的描写

(1)倍数关系描写（见1）;

(2)分数关系：one/a fifth of, 8 out of 10, at a fraction of…

(3)组成：consist of, be made up of…, be composed of…

(4)比例： account for.., represent, take up..,

(5)对比：compared to, in comparison with…, relative to…, the ratio is….

Eg. Female executives dominate in the age group between 24 and 39, where the ratio is 42 to 10. (The first representing the number of women and latter, men ). Eg. It decreases half in group 60 to 69 where 10 women hold top position in comparison to/with 21 men.

Eg. The graphs shows the number of cars per 100 people over the period 1980 to 2020 relative to the growth of the world‘s population.

9. 大小的比较

(1)差：spread(差价), margin, split, difference,

差额为正/负：xxx remained positive/negative

(2)占多数，a. XXX dominate in the XX group/amongst….

b. In the age range above…, XXX are in /sliding / majority.

(3)超过: a. XXX exceeded/outstrippedXXX but not by the same margin, b. XXX exceeded XX by XX percent, outnumber xxx by XXX.

c. exceed XX-level. With the earnings exceeding XXX.

(4) 比例相等：a. an equal number of both…and…

b. XXX take an equal proportion in ….

(5) 从小到大描述数据：followed by

Eg. 44% of our sales income came from US, followed by Europe(26%), and

south America(19%)

(6)排序的描写： ranked No.1/2; The second /third largest…; be in the

first/second/third place.

10. 表示预测的句子; be likely to…/is expected to…./is supposed to…/is estimated

to../is projected to…/will/will be

11. 叙述受访者态度

(1)XXX received XX positive responses and XX negative responses..

(2) XX people gave a positive response/comment on..

(3)Asked about…., XX people responded positively/negatively whereas XX

people say sth negative about it.

(4) XX of xx respondents complained about….while XX though it positively,

/thought it to be satisfactory

12. Distribution

(1) xx%, more than half XX, XX out of XX…

(2) the respondents are almost equally divided between XXX and XX(different stances)

(3)XX and xxx take a similar proportion in XX group/range

13. data and compare的中心句

(1)The company employs almost an equal number of executives of both sexes. However, there are remarkable differences depending on the age range considered.

(2)The overall result of this international survey on planned IT expenditure for the next year shows significant differences between Europe and Aisa.

(3)The situation in XX, however, is quite different.

(4)however, the XX vary greatly on the XX…