要在上海找工作了,这是我的英文resume我和我在美国的recuiter把这个英文的简历完工了.虽然他是professional但毕竟是美国人,他说简历要简洁,用动词,不能用complete sentence.我需要在上海外资企业有

要在上海找工作了,这是我的英文resume我和我在美国的recuiter把这个英文的简历完工了.虽然他是professional但毕竟是美国人,他说简历要简洁,用动词,不能用complete sentence.我需要在上海外资企业有
要在上海找工作了,这是我的英文resume
我和我在美国的recuiter把这个英文的简历完工了.虽然他是professional但毕竟是美国人,他说简历要简洁,用动词,不能用complete sentence.我需要在上海外资企业有工作经验的朋友给一点建议!（格式,排列,语法）这是准备在上海找工作.看到答案后我会再增加悬赏分的.还有在中国面试要注意些什么?等这些问题解决后,要开始折腾中文简历了.
OBJECTIVE:
Seeking accounting/finance related position
EDUCATION:
University of North Carolina at Greensboro (UNCG)
B.S in Accounting,August 2006
Relevant courses:Financial Accounting,Managerial Accounting,Intermediate Accounting,Accounting Information Systems,Business computing I,Business Process Information Technology,Communication Studies,Business Ethics
ADDITIONAL EDUCATION:
HR Block
Tax course (September 2007-November 2007)
SKILLS:
Computer:MS Office (Word,Excel,PowerPoint,Access) Internet,Ralph,PeopleSoft,QuickBooks,AS400,Concur
Languages:English,Chinese
WORK EXPERIENCE:
ENTERPRISE RENT A CAR
Area Accountant May 2006-May 2007
 Provide internal support to 12 rental branches
 Approve cash receipts and petty cash
 Review / train branches on journal vouchers
 Key Accounts Payables into PeopleSoft
 End of month accruals
 Work on Accounts Receivable reports daily
 Work on group accounts weekly
 Fixed asset audits / setting up fixed assets
 Work on car sales reports weekly and EOM
 Work on deleted units reports weekly and EOM
Title Coordinator
 Process 200-500 car sales per month
 Make out titles / key car sales
 Handle title requests from various regions and states
 Generate title requests
 Familiar with NC state law regarding vehicle itles
 Work on Greensboro auto auction block summary weekly
 Work on units transferred to inventory daily
 Train other title clerks at various regions
LANDMARK AVIATION
Charter Accountant June 2007-Present
 Code Corporate VISA Card
 Code Accounts Payables
 Reconcile monthly reports against General Ledger
 Handle any clients request
 Approve expenses report
 Reconcile end of month accounts
 Accounts Receivable collection calls
 Generate invoices and create billing sheets
 Write / Post Journal Entries
 Create monthly reports for plane owners
ADDITIONAL INFORMATION:
Volunteered at Big Sweep Summer 2000
Cleaned areas around the rivers
Volunteered at East Brach Library Summer 2001
Organized children’s program
Volunteered at G&J Speedway Gymnastics
Winter 2003-present
Office assistant
我已经减少很多了，但是怎么还这么多！

要在上海找工作了,这是我的英文resume我和我在美国的recuiter把这个英文的简历完工了.虽然他是professional但毕竟是美国人,他说简历要简洁,用动词,不能用complete sentence.我需要在上海外资企业有
你工作过的,把work experience 放在education前面,时间降序排列
动词用过去式 i.e.provided
你内容写太多了,超过一页,要缩减一下,把 responsibility 归纳一下,减少点.

一楼说的不错 可以考虑先介绍workexperience 最后再介绍你的education和Landmare adviation
你把additional education 并到education里面比较好 如果可以把additional information 去掉也好.毕竟额外的东西总给人感觉是可有可无的! additional is not special.
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一楼说的不错 可以考虑先介绍workexperience 最后再介绍你的education和Landmare adviation
你把additional education 并到education里面比较好 如果可以把additional information 去掉也好.毕竟额外的东西总给人感觉是可有可无的! additional is not special.
resume精简是王道!!最好是一页搞定!
PS:另外把你的课程精简下,只写和你工作有关系的课程就好!如果就是会计的话,那么后面的课程基本上不要附带了!

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