I'm new here.And it's very happy for me to join the big family ,I am honored to be your student.I'm new hereAnd it's very happy for me to join the big family ,I am honored to be your student.I want to say I will follow you to improve my English.In fa

I'm new here.And it's very happy for me to join the big family ,I am honored to be your student.I'm new hereAnd it's very happy for me to join the big family ,I am honored to be your student.I want to say I will follow you to improve my English.In fa
I'm new here.And it's very happy for me to join the big family ,I am honored to be your student.
I'm new hereAnd it's very happy for me to join the big family ,I am honored to be your student.I want to say I will follow you to improve my English.In fact,I love English and I want to try my best to learn it better.Though I know it may be different from Jenior high school,I think I have ability to do well.I believe I will be proud of my English with you help in the future.In the past few years,I have been good at English.And I think it's not very difficult for me to understand.But I also have trouble in studying English.On the one hand,learning grammer is difficult for me.If I had not studied it,then I won't get a good Results.On the other hand,I can't review on time.So my English hardly ever makes great progress,I hope I can get over these bad habits.To study English with you is my pleasure.At last,I want to say "Thank you my first English teacher in Senior high school."I am sure strongly that if I study harder and harder,I will be happier and happier.Teacher ,entering nine is always my dream and now I come true.I change my mind.I want to fly from now on.Now I have more confidence to improve myself.I will be a hardworking student.I need your help and I won't let you down.

I'm new here.And it's very happy for me to join the big family ,I am honored to be your student.I'm new hereAnd it's very happy for me to join the big family ,I am honored to be your student.I want to say I will follow you to improve my English.In fa
1.第三行中的Jenior应为Junior
2.第三行中的have ability中间必须加the 表示“有能力做某事”
3.第四行with you help中you改为your
4.第六行 If I had not studied...是对过去的假设,此处应是现在的假设,应为：if I didn't study...
5.第六行 a good Results中的a应去掉
6.第八行 Thank you后加加逗号
7.倒数第三行 中的I come true是错误的,应为my dream has come true

I will follow 改为i will learn ton you
to learn it better === to improve it
with you help ,I believe I will be proud of my English in the future
on one hand ,on the other hand
So ...

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I will follow 改为i will learn ton you
to learn it better === to improve it
with you help ,I believe I will be proud of my English in the future
on one hand ,on the other hand
So my English hardly ever makes great progress---------so i haven't made great progress in my english
get over ----------------get rid of 摆脱
I am sure strongly ------------i am definitely sure
I come true------------------i come it ture

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第二句 I'm very happy to join the big family