来帮我找下这段英语是否有病句并改正谢谢I don't like talking,but I like enjoy listening to you I can't cry easily,because my tears only flow for youI've become boldness,because you are beside meI don't know what is romanticism,but I

来帮我找下这段英语是否有病句并改正谢谢I don't like talking,but I like enjoy listening to you I can't cry easily,because my tears only flow for youI've become boldness,because you are beside meI don't know what is romanticism,but I
来帮我找下这段英语是否有病句并改正谢谢
I don't like talking,but I like enjoy listening to you
I can't cry easily,because my tears only flow for you
I've become boldness,because you are beside me
I don't know what is romanticism,but I can fight for you
I don't know who I am,but I know you are my angel
Sometimes I care nothing about you,but I really love you
I can't give you anything,but I promises that I will never leave away form you first
I wish we could stay forever as one,you will find the meaning of love

来帮我找下这段英语是否有病句并改正谢谢I don't like talking,but I like enjoy listening to you I can't cry easily,because my tears only flow for youI've become boldness,because you are beside meI don't know what is romanticism,but I
I don't like talking,but I enjoy listening to you
把like 去掉 否则动词重复
I've become bold,because you are beside me
boldness 变为bold ,bold是勇敢的意思 而boldness是名次
i can't give you anything,but I promise that I will never leave away from you first
promises 变为promise ,i是第一人称 动词用原型
form 改为from

第一句：like去掉，like and enjoy重复
第三句：become bold, or brave (which i think is better)
倒数2：promises-> promise form-> from
倒三：really->truly 更好些

I don't like talking, but I like listening to you
I can't cry easily, because my tears only flow for you
I've become boldness, because you are beside me
I don't know what is romanticis...

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I don't like talking, but I like listening to you
I can't cry easily, because my tears only flow for you
I've become boldness, because you are beside me
I don't know what is romanticism, but I can fight for you
I don't know who I am, but I know you are my angel
Sometimes I care nothing about you, but I really love you
I can't give you anything, but I promises that I will never leave away form you first
I wish we could stay forever as one, you will find the meaning of love

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