英语改错,一共有十处,When I was about five or six years old,I was used to have a friend called Helen Arthur.She was very tall and thin with a short brown hair,a round his face or a small nose.I still remember we used to playing the street and

英语改错,一共有十处,When I was about five or six years old,I was used to have a friend called Helen Arthur.She was very tall and thin with a short brown hair,a round his face or a small nose.I still remember we used to playing the street and
英语改错,一共有十处,
When I was about five or six years old,I was used to have a friend called Helen Arthur.She was very tall and thin with a short brown hair,a round his face or a small nose.I still remember we used to playing the street and in his garden.Helen lived in the house next mine.She had a brother called Jim,which was about five years older than her.I don't knew where Helen is now or what she is doing.The last time I saw her was about 25 years before,just before I started secondary schools.这里面有十处错误,请帮我改出来,
注意 a round his face！

英语改错,一共有十处,When I was about five or six years old,I was used to have a friend called Helen Arthur.She was very tall and thin with a short brown hair,a round his face or a small nose.I still remember we used to playing the street and
1 was used to have改为was used to haveing
2 his face,去掉his
3 or 改为and
4 playing 改为 play in
5 his garden改为her garden
6 next mine 改为next to mine
7 which 改为who
8 knew 改为know
9 25 years before 改为25 years ago
10 schools 改为 school

1. I was used to having
2. a short brown hair去掉a
3. face or a small or 改成and
4. used to playing改成play in
5. in the house next to mine
6. which was about 改成who was about
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1. I was used to having
2. a short brown hair去掉a
3. face or a small or 改成and
4. used to playing改成play in
5. in the house next to mine
6. which was about 改成who was about
7. older than her 改成 than she
8. I don't knew改成I don't know
9. 25 years before 改成25 years ago
10. 最后一个词schools变成单数

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1' I was at about five years old
be used to having
2'next to mine
3' saw her was at about 25 years just before I started secondary schools
4'
playing in the street

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1' I was at about five years old
be used to having
2'next to mine
3' saw her was at about 25 years just before I started secondary schools
4'
playing in the street

5'She was very tall with a short brown hair,has a round his face and a small nose
就想到这些，没办法了，这篇文章太罗嗦

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