一道短文改错题,帮帮我~~~~~~~~~~~~When I came to your home,I found that you are out.So I had to leave you a note. I'd like to inviting you to my birthday party at 7:00p.m.tomorrow evening.Let me tell you how to get to my flat.You should take

一道短文改错题,帮帮我~~~~~~~~~~~~When I came to your home,I found that you are out.So I had to leave you a note. I'd like to inviting you to my birthday party at 7:00p.m.tomorrow evening.Let me tell you how to get to my flat.You should take
一道短文改错题,帮帮我~~~~~~~~~~~~
When I came to your home,I found that you are out.So I
had to leave you a note.

I'd like to inviting you to my birthday party at 7:00p.m.
tomorrow evening.Let me tell you how to get to my flat.
You should take Bus No.5 and to get off at the terminal.
Then you should walk back down the Main Road to the direction
of Shanghai to across the road by the subway.After crossing
the road,turn right and go across the bridge over the river on
your left.When you come to the crossroads,turn to left and go
straightly on and take the second right turning.Soon you'll
find a bank easily.Take the road opposite the bank,you'll
see Block 6.My flat is 408 on the four floor.You can't miss it.

一道短文改错题,帮帮我~~~~~~~~~~~~When I came to your home,I found that you are out.So I had to leave you a note. I'd like to inviting you to my birthday party at 7:00p.m.tomorrow evening.Let me tell you how to get to my flat.You should take
改完后的：
When I went your house,I found that you were out.So I
had to leave you a note.
I'd like to invite you to my birthday party at 7:00p.m.
tomorrow evening.Let me tell you how to get to my apartment.
You should take Bus No.5 and get off at the terminal.
Then you should walk back down the Main Road to the direction
of Shanghai and across the road by the subway.After crossing
the road,turn right and go across the bridge over the river on
your left.When you come to the crossroads,turn left and go
straight on and take the second right turn.Soon you'll
find a bank easily.Take the road opposite to the bank,you'll
see Block 6.My flat is 408 on the forth floor.You can't miss it.

i found that you WERE out
i'd like to INVITE you ~~
No.5 and get off 没to
to across-to cross the road
go straightly-go straight(本身就是副词）
four-fourth
眼花了找不到了，最讨厌改错！楼主更烦这吧！！