这段英语有语法,I evalue my account budget and find I'm short of money.I'm in great need of it.My mother has realized my financial embarrassment.And it's true.But I believe I'll get over it if I have found a job.It's very necessary.So I am hunt

这段英语有语法,I evalue my account budget and find I'm short of money.I'm in great need of it.My mother has realized my financial embarrassment.And it's true.But I believe I'll get over it if I have found a job.It's very necessary.So I am hunt
这段英语有语法,
I evalue my account budget and find I'm short of money.I'm in great need of it.My mother has realized my financial embarrassment.And it's true.But I believe I'll get over it if I have found a job.It's very necessary.So I am hunting for a job immediately.My father adviced me to work as a bank clerk first.Due to my present situation,I'll find a job to earn money as soon as possible.
除此之外,再问下
“account budget ”是专有名词吗?可以这样用吗?
"I budget my financial case"这样有错吗？（我预算了下我的经济情况）

这段英语有语法,I evalue my account budget and find I'm short of money.I'm in great need of it.My mother has realized my financial embarrassment.And it's true.But I believe I'll get over it if I have found a job.It's very necessary.So I am hunt
当然有.日前不是已经帮你解决了类似问题了吗?还要写另一篇?
没有“account budget ”这个词,
最后一句可改为：I planned my budget in view of my financial situation.
全文可改为：When I did my own budgetary evaluation,I found I'm short of money.I'm in great need of it,in fact.My mother has realized my financial embarrassment.And it's true.But I believe I'll get over it if I can find a job.It's very necessary.So I am hunting for a job immediately.My father adviced me to work as a bank clerk first.Due to my present situation,I'll look for a job to earn money as soon as possible.

evalue这个词汇我没看懂。account budget你是要表达什么，不是专有名词。
But i believe i will get over it, if i find a job.但我相信如果我找到工作，我就会克服这个难关。
It's very necessary.在文中有点突兀，也没表达清楚很有必要做什么，使文变得不连贯了。
So I am hunting fo...

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evalue这个词汇我没看懂。account budget你是要表达什么，不是专有名词。
But i believe i will get over it, if i find a job.但我相信如果我找到工作，我就会克服这个难关。
It's very necessary.在文中有点突兀，也没表达清楚很有必要做什么，使文变得不连贯了。
So I am hunting for a job immediately.这句的immediately应该去掉。So I am hunting for a job。所以我正在寻找一份工作。
I make a budget of my financial condition.我预算了下我的经济情况。

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i evalue my account budget and find I'm short of money.I'm in great need of it.My mother has realized my financial embarrassment. And it's true. But I believe I'll get it over if I find ...

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i evalue my account budget and find I'm short of money.I'm in great need of it.My mother has realized my financial embarrassment. And it's true. But I believe I'll get it over if I find a job.It's very necessary.So I am hunting for a job as quickly as possible.My father advised me to work as a bank clerk first.Due to my present situation, I'll find a job to earn money as soon as possible.

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