帮我检查一下英语的语法错误Summer vacation wills to an end immediately,this is the last summer vacation in my life,also the most miraculous.The summer vacations have never been more meaningful than this one,has never been a holiday can be

帮我检查一下英语的语法错误Summer vacation wills to an end immediately,this is the last summer vacation in my life,also the most miraculous.The summer vacations have never been more meaningful than this one,has never been a holiday can be
帮我检查一下英语的语法错误
Summer vacation wills to an end immediately,this is the last summer vacation in my life,also the most miraculous.The summer vacations have never been more meaningful than this one,has never been a holiday can be so long,which is thanks for the Beijing Olympics.Of course,I would also like to thanks for everyone around.
Each time to leave,the weather is always become cool,Like to see my off.Is my future will have such a holiday?such youth,such irritable and depressed,such joy and tears,such happy and pleasant.Perhaps after some years,when I recall this busy and miraculous time,perhaps it will be profoundly remembered.
Anyway,my holiday will be over soon,goodbye,my friends,good-bye,my Last Summer Vacation.
我的英语不是一般的差劲！而这个文大多数是机器翻译。错误较多。

帮我检查一下英语的语法错误Summer vacation wills to an end immediately,this is the last summer vacation in my life,also the most miraculous.The summer vacations have never been more meaningful than this one,has never been a holiday can be
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Summer vacation will COME to an end immediately AND this is the last ONE in my life,SO IT IS also the most miraculous.SUMMER VACATIONS BEFORE have never been THAT meaningful AS this one.THANKS TO THE OLYMPICS,OR IT WOUDN'T HAVE BEEN THAT LONG.Of course,I would also like to thank for everyone THAT AROUND ME.
EVERY time LEAVING the weather always becomeS cool AND IT SEEMS LIKES SEEING my off.WILL my future have such a holiday AGAIN?SO YOUNG,such irritableNESS and depressION,SO MUCH joy and tears,SO happy and PLEASING.MAYBE I recall this busy and miraculous time AND it will be profoundly remembered AFTER SOME YEARS.
Anyway,my holiday will END soon,goodbye,my friends,good-bye,my Last Summer Vacation.

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Summer vacation will end soon, this is the last summer vacation in my life and also the most miraculous one. The summer vacations have never been more meaningful than this one thanks to the Beijing Olympics. Of course, I would also like to thank everyone around me.
Each time when the vacation is about to end, the weather always gets cooler. It's almost like it's trying to see me off. Will I have such a wonderful holiday like this one in the future? So vibrant, so irritable and depressed, so much joy and tears, so much happiness and pleasant memory. Perhaps some years later, when I think about this busy and miraculous period, it will be fondly remembered.
Anyway, my holiday will be over soon. Goodbye, my friends! Good-bye, my last summer vacation!

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