求英语作文改错请帮忙看看英语作文有没有什么错误,随便在改几个高大上的句型,No purpose no spiritLife without a specific purpose just like an arrow without goal ,only when you know your purpose of life can you bow and em

求英语作文改错请帮忙看看英语作文有没有什么错误,随便在改几个高大上的句型,No purpose no spiritLife without a specific purpose just like an arrow without goal ,only when you know your purpose of life can you bow and em
求英语作文改错
请帮忙看看英语作文有没有什么错误,随便在改几个高大上的句型,
No purpose no spirit
Life without a specific purpose just like an arrow without goal ,only when you know your purpose of life can you bow and emit the arrow.Life without a specific purpose just like a voyage without lighthouse ,only when you know your purpose of life you can get your destination finally.Goal is like the compass,I lost it in the forest.My life would have lost in that forest!
We were told by parents or teacher that you are supposed to do that or not through the period of growing up.However ,have you ever thought of why do you set the life goal and what for?An analogy may help explain what I mean.One day ,you caught a sight of a pair of shoes on display in the window.You then took a fond of it ,for it looks so charming under the bright light and you bought it without hesitation although they are too small for you.You wear them out the following days and everyone you met said they were really fascinating.But they really hurt your feet badly.In the end ,you find the old sports shoes with dust in your closet .Above all ,It goes without saying that the most suitable is the best.
No way is plain without any rocks .No one can deny the fact that we may fail through the way to your dream .But the failures which defeated you are meaningful and encouraging.The most strong arm is your courage.Only having courage can you carry on to the ultimate of dream .Only having courage cannot you missing the direction when struggling with feat.
From what has been discussed above,we can draw the conclusion that the purpose is spirit of one person.No purpose no spirit.

求英语作文改错请帮忙看看英语作文有没有什么错误,随便在改几个高大上的句型,No purpose no spiritLife without a specific purpose just like an arrow without goal ,only when you know your purpose of life can you bow and em
No purpose,no spirit(Without goal,without spirit)
Living a life without a life goal is just like an arrow without its destination--You can only aim and shoot the goal when you know what your goal is; it's like a voyage without lighthouses,you can only finish the sail when you know where your destination is.A life goal was a compass for life--I would not go on the right track without it.
We have been asked to do things or not during we growing by our parents and teachers.However,have you ever been thinking of why should you set a life goal?An analogy may help you understand what I mean:some day ,you caught a sight of a pair of shoes in the shopwindow.Although they were really tiny for you,it was so cute and charming that you cannot deny to buy it.The uncomfortable feelings almost killed you during the next few days when you were wearing it,but you smiled anyway for everybody else's compliments.
Accidentally,you found a pair of old and dirty sneakers suits you the best.Everyone makes mistakes,all of us have failed before on the way to our goal.In this case,the most right thing to do is to be brave and face the failures,to see it as a challenge--make it meaningful and unforgetable.You cannot depend on any one but yourself.Only courage can help you achieve the goal.Only courage help you find the direction.
In conclusion,the goal is the soul of one person.Without goal,without spirit.

No purpose no spirit
Life without a specific purpose is just like an arrow without goal ,only when you know your purpose of life can you bow and emit the arrow. Life without a specific purpose is ...

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No purpose no spirit
Life without a specific purpose is just like an arrow without goal ,only when you know your purpose of life can you bow and emit the arrow. Life without a specific purpose is just like a voyage without lighthouse ,only when you know your purpose of life can you get your destination finally.Goal is like the compass, I lost it in the forest. My life would have lost in that forest!
We were told by parents or teacher that we are supposed to do that or we could not get through the period of growing up. However ,have you ever considered why do you set the life goal and what for?An analogy may help explain what I mean. One day ,you caught a sight of a pair of shoes on display in the window. You then took a fond of it ,for it looks so charming under the bright light and you bought it without hesitation although they are too small for you. You wear them out the following days and everyone you met said they were really fascinating. But they really hurt your feet badly. In the end ,you find the old sports shoes with dust in your closet . Above all ,It goes without saying that the most suitable is the best.No way is plain without any rocks .No one can deny the fact that we may fail through the way to your dream . But the failures which defeated you are meaningful and encouraging. The most strong arm is your courage. Only having courage can you carry on to the ultimate of dream . Only having courage cannot you missing the direction when struggling with feat.
From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that the purpose is spirit of one person.No purpose no spirit.
修改完毕 看的都累 基本没什么错误 还是不错滴 请给分并列为最佳答案 谢谢

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