帮忙改一篇英语短文 在200字以内 越简单越好~~在线等~~Money Is Not Everything Money and Morality Almost all things here on earth can be bought with money.. For many people, money is everything. They believe that having a lot of mone

帮忙改一篇英语短文 在200字以内 越简单越好~~在线等~~Money Is Not Everything Money and Morality Almost all things here on earth can be bought with money.. For many people, money is everything. They believe that having a lot of mone
帮忙改一篇英语短文 在200字以内 越简单越好~~在线等~~
Money Is Not Everything
Money and Morality
Almost all things here on earth can be bought with money.. For many people, money is everything. They believe that having a lot of money can bring them to the satisfaction of which they have dreamed. That's how powerful is money. It can control the mind of an individual.
Many people, because of their obsession to have more money will do anything, even if they have to transfigure people into objects to acquire what they really want. That is why in our economy today, the rich become richer, and the poor become poorer. How sad it is to know that kind of reality.
Money can be acquired in many ways. Most people will work to earn money. Some will create a business to accumulate and increase the amount of money they have. In moments of desperation, most people would pawn their jewelry and other belongings to obtain instant money. Some of them would sell their properties and even their structured settlements in order for them to have available cash. The worst thing is that a person would risk his own life and dignity by doing a criminal act only to have money. How ironic it is. They think of money as everything to their lives, but they are wrong, absolutely wrong.
but it does not the only reason of our existence on earth. Money is important, but it is not everything. our family, our friends, They can help us in our life.
Remember that money is only a material thing. It is created for our convenience, but you shouldn’t lost yourself.

帮忙改一篇英语短文 在200字以内 越简单越好~~在线等~~Money Is Not Everything Money and Morality Almost all things here on earth can be bought with money.. For many people, money is everything. They believe that having a lot of mone
Money and Morality
Almost all things on earth can be bought with money..For many people,money is everything.They believe that having a lot of money can bring them the satisfaction of which they have always been dreaming.That's how powerful money is.It can control the mind of an individual.
Many people,because of their lust for having more money,will do anything.They will even transfigure people into objects to acquire what they really want.That is why in our economy today,the rich become richer,and the poor become poorer.How sad it is to know the reality.
Money can be acquired in many ways.Most people will work to earn money.Some will invent in a business to accumulate and increase the amount of money .Under desperation,most people will pawn their jewelry and other belongings to get instant money.Some of them will sell their properties and even their structured settlements(?是什么?) in order that they will have cash.The worst thing is that a person would risk his own life and dignity to commit a crime only to get money.How ironic it is.!They regard money as whole of their lives,but they are wrong,absolutely .
but it is not the only reason for our existence on earth.Money is important,but it is not everything.our family,our friends,They can help us in our life.
Remember that money is only a material thing.It is created for convenience,in which you shouldn’t lose yourself.
有许多不好的表达都改过来了,有一个短语看不懂

Money Is Not Everything
For many people, money is everything. They believe that having a lot of money can bring them to the satisfaction. That's how powerful is money. It can control the mind of...

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Money Is Not Everything
For many people, money is everything. They believe that having a lot of money can bring them to the satisfaction. That's how powerful is money. It can control the mind of an individual.
Money can be got in many ways. Most people will work to earn money. Some will create a business to increase the amount of money they have. Some of them would sell their houses in order for them to have available cash. The worst thing is that a person would risk his own life and dignity by doing a criminal act only to have money.
Money is important, but it is not everything. our family, our friends, They can help us in our life.
Remember that money is only a material thing. It is created for our convenience, but you shouldn’t lost yourself.

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