作业帮英语作文（帮我看看）我们写一篇作文,主题是：就学校食堂情况给学校写一封信我的作文如下：Dear Principle:I am a senior student of our school.I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school.First
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英语作文（帮我看看）我们写一篇作文,主题是：就学校食堂情况给学校写一封信我的作文如下：Dear Principle:I am a senior student of our school.I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school.First
英语作文（帮我看看）
我们写一篇作文,主题是：就学校食堂情况给学校写一封信
我的作文如下：
Dear Principle:
I am a senior student of our school.I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school.
First of all,our canteen is big and neat.Food is delicious,but the price of it is little high,I suggest that it should be gone down,for students can't make money to support themselves.On the other hand,there are a little kinds of food so that we can't choose them as we like,you should change it often.Also ,the servicers's attiutide is satisfiying us,they really like our friends.The last but not the least,we often cost long time to buy food,we can't stand anymore
That's all the things I'd like to say.Thank you for your consideration of them,I'd be greatful if you can take my suggestions!
英语作文（帮我看看）我们写一篇作文,主题是：就学校食堂情况给学校写一封信我的作文如下：Dear Principle:I am a senior student of our school.I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school.First
say 改成talk好些, a little. So I suggest (英语写作很注重连词的使用) 内容还好 就是细节上注意 可以自己多看几遍修改