英文短文改错（共有十处错误）My hometown there used to be a temple with a history of over eight hundreds years.It lies in a valley with green hills around it.It was such beautiful and famous that many touristscame visit it every day.They

英文短文改错（共有十处错误）My hometown there used to be a temple with a history of over eight hundreds years.It lies in a valley with green hills around it.It was such beautiful and famous that many touristscame visit it every day.They
英文短文改错（共有十处错误）
My hometown there used to be a temple with a history of over eight hundreds years.It lies in a valley with green hills around it.It was such beautiful and famous that many tourists
came visit it every day.They took photo；they wrote down their names on the walls；they were brought food and drink and left rubbish everywhere One day some tourists did a fire to cook food near the temple.All of sudden,a strong wind blew .The wooden temple caught fire .Soon the wholly temple was burned out and only a little walls remained .The beautiful temple disappeared.

英文短文改错（共有十处错误）My hometown there used to be a temple with a history of over eight hundreds years.It lies in a valley with green hills around it.It was such beautiful and famous that many touristscame visit it every day.They
My hometown there used to be a temple with a history of over eight hundreds years.It lies(修改laid) in a valley with green hills around it.It was such beautiful and famous that many tourists
came visit it every day.They took photo（修改为：photoes)；they wrote down their names on the walls；they （were删除） brought food and drink（修改为drank） and left rubbish everywhere One day some tourists did a fire to cook food near the temple.All of（加a) sudden,a strong wind blew .The wooden temple caught fire .Soon the wholly(修改为whole) temple was burned out and only a little walls remained .The beautiful temple disappeared.

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In my hometown there used to be a temple with a history of over eight (hundreds改成hundred) years. It (lies改成lay) in a valley with green hills around it. It was (such改成so) beautifu...

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In my hometown there used to be a temple with a history of over eight (hundreds改成hundred) years. It (lies改成lay) in a valley with green hills around it. It was (such改成so) beautiful and famous that many tourists came (加入to) visit it every day. They took (photo改成photos)；they wrote down their names on the walls；they (去掉were) brought food and drink and left rubbish everywhere. One day some tourists (did改成made) a fire to cook food near the temple. All of (加入a) sudden,a strong wind blew.The wooden temple caught fire. Soon the (wholly改成whole) temple was burned out and only a (little改成few) walls remained.The beautiful temple disappeared.
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